I published a YA fantasy that has been getting great reviews. However, feedback has been that neither the title nor the cover gets across the idea of the story so I’m redesigning it. The original was Desiccate. Now it’s From Leya’s Eyes. First line of blurb “Leya Truelong has the potential to become a powerful Double Vision Mistress, if she can control her impulsiveness and temper and avoid being stripped of her gifts in a painful and debilitating ritual.” Do you think my new cover idea works?